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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:29, 10 July 2014 (UTC)

Al-Risalah al-Dhahabiah[edit]

The hook ALT1 is preferred to the original one. Mhhossein (talk) 04:43, 9 July 2014 (UTC)

Created by Mhhossein (talk). Self nominated at 12:28, 22 June 2014 (UTC).

  • It looks like an interesting article. Article size and age are fine. Now regarding the prose - you must use more different words than those in this source as the wording is too close - if you have trouble finding synonyms I can help. More to come. I am not very familiar with islamic sources but I don't think refs 3,4,5 or 6 qualify as reliable sources, surely there must be some others? Also, ref 7, is it a book or a journal? If so does it have an isbn or doi number? The arabic source that is an external link looks like it could be a reliable source but my google translate won't pick it up - what is it? Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:59, 25 June 2014 (UTC)
  • The mentioned references were replaced by suitable reliable sources. "Ref 7", which is now ref 6, is an old book apparently without isbn or doi. Mhhossein (talk) 04:50, 9 July 2014 (UTC)
  • Pulled ALT0 from prep since none of the words control or temperature or skin occur in the article. EEng (talk) 04:38, 10 July 2014 (UTC)
Oops, meant to specify we need to use ALT1. I checked for that one, source cites it. size and age ok. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 07:23, 10 July 2014 (UTC)