Talk:Travis King/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Nominator: Anime King (talk · contribs) 14:04, 6 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Czarking0 (talk · contribs) 23:09, 4 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello and thank you for opening this review. I think this article is close to GA but has some issues I'd like to remedy.

Rate	Attribute	Review Comment
1. Well-written:
	1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.	"the country he was stationed in at the time of the crossing" - change to where he was stationed at the time of crossing Done " potentially prompting his crossing" - change to which may have prompted his crossing Done "He later pleaded guilty to assault and destruction of public goods and paid ₩1 million (US$783) to fix the vehicle." then "It was also reported that he did not pay a fine" - this does not make sense did he pay it or not ? Done
	1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.	I think we should consider rewriting this article so it is not a biography according to WP:BIO thoughts?
2. Verifiable with no original research:
	2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.	WP:NYPOST is not a reliable source and should not be used for potentially libelous information of a WP:BLP. I believe WION is a similar tabliod but I am unfamilar with this source. Can you demonstrate that it is reliable? If not you should remove that as well. If both of those are removed I believe you do not have a reliavle source that shows connections with solicitation of child pornography. Can you find another source for that? Done The talk page had some good comments on how his age seems ambiguous here. Can you comment on that? Done
	2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).
	2c. it contains no original research.
	2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism.	"The military escort had no ticket and was not allowed past the checkpoint. " This sentence is a direct copy from an article please change. Done
3. Broad in its coverage:
	3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.
	3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).
	4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
	5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
	6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.
	6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.	Can we find an image of him?
	7. Overall assessment.

Responses[edit]

I did some work related to the review comments:
I changed the first two of three bullet points under 1a. I don't have time right now to check for third bullet point.
2a first bullet point I changed The NY Post and WION News to ABC News and The New York Times. However, New York Post still comes in as a reference for (currently) reference #43 which is the first in the section "Charges under the Uniform Code of Military Justice". Unsure if that would need to be defended or changed as well.
Re-wrote 2d so it no longer is copy/pasted from a news article.
I am very curious on 6a and 6b as I have seen wikis of various enlisted personel have what looks like an official military photo. Would that be applicable?
I am unable to contribute more right now but did what I can to help towards addressing a chunk of the issues raised. ₪RicknAsia₪ 02:37, 8 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I think you should still remove the NYPost source, but for now I added the NYT and ABC sources that you linked above since they support the same facts. If you do not wish to remove it then, I don't think that would constitute a failure in GA since there is now other sources supporting the same material. Czarking0 (talk) 23:48, 8 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
For 6, I won't fail the article under that but I think an enlistment photo would be great. Main thing I am still waiting on is the confusion around his age and if he paid the fine. Czarking0 (talk) 23:51, 8 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Just realized you are not the nominator. I appreciate your help Czarking0 (talk) 23:52, 8 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Honestly this is fun :) I'm excited at the idea of bumping up the rating of this Korea-related article. I removed his birthdate and year as I cannot find anything that doesn't cite/rip off this Wiki article or isn't a good source to cite. I'll work on the fine later this week and am inquiring with some military friends about if/where I can find a photo of him that could be usable but am coming up empty. Thank you for checking the updates on this Talk page, I truly apprecite it. ₪RicknAsia₪ 06:06, 13 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I think the weirdness around his birthdate and high school graduation may just be true?

1. "Travis King, 23, a 2020 graduate of Park High School in Racine, has been missing since July 18, one day after officials say he was supposed to fly back to the United States." Which is from a local newspaper interview with his father. I suppose the journalist could have made a mistake, but I would consider this credible.

Williams, S., & The (Racine), J. T. (2023, Jul 26). FATHER SUSPECTS SON WAS DRINKING BEFORE CROSSING: TRAVIS KING | US SOLDIER IN NORTH KOREA. Wisconsin State Journal Retrieved from https://www.proquest.com/newspapers/father-suspects-son-was-drinking-before-crossing/docview/2841808908/se-2

2. "King, a 23-year-old cavalry scout with the 1st Armored Division, was supposed to leave Monday for Texas. He was escorted as far as customs but left the airport before boarding his plane."

Glauber, B. (2023, Jul 21). Family of racine soldier pleads for his return: U.S. army pvt. travis king held in north korea. Herald Times Reporter Retrieved from https://www.proquest.com/newspapers/family-racine-soldier-pleads-his-return/docview/2840147861/se-2

3. This source verifies his graduation: https://journaltimes.com/news/local/education/park-high-school-graduates/article_05da6c76-a28e-588b-8cdd-d635a50dc199.html

Given multiple sources seem to corroborate his age I think it should be included in the article Czarking0 (talk) 22:27, 14 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Czarking0 I will still look for the enlistment photo ("hero photo") that was splashed in the media but am growing less and less confident I will be able to find it. I fixed the fine issue and added an additional reference from The Independent. In a nutshell, he was ordered to pay a fine in 2022 (which he did) and then ordered to pay a separate and larger fine in 2023 (which he did not). Thank you again for your time and I hope that covers the issues. ₪RicknAsia₪ 04:34, 14 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I reached out to some people on the WP discord. Since all the news articles are able to get these images I feel like we should be able to as well. I'll give it another day Czarking0 (talk) 22:42, 14 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I don't think we need to worry abut the photo. Did you see my comment about reworking it to not be a WP:BIO ? Czarking0 (talk) 03:14, 19 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]