Talk:Low-nutrient, low-chlorophyll region

I reviewed your article and provided feedback here: [[1]] This page is really strong. The information is well-articulated and organized. It flows really well and it is organized in a sensible way. Honestly can't say anything bad about it, I just provided a couple suggestions. Great work!Merrilju (talk) 05:44, 16 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Really great work on this article so far! It is well-organized and easy to follow. I just have a few minor recommendations: - The first section on chlorophyll and primary production is super well-written, but I would maybe add in one or two more sentences at the beginning tying in the relation to LNLC regions to give the reader more context - The pictures you included are great! Maybe expand upon your figure captions to draw in more connections to biogeochemical cycles and the significance of these regions - If possible, expand upon the LNLC monitoring section with more detail about how these sites collect data, what parameters they measure, and what this data is used for - Excellent breakdown of sub-topics and great use of scientific literature - Maybe expand upon why the Mediterranean Sea is phosphorus-limited? Overall you guys did a great job and the article looks fantastic! I hope this is helpful! Kvickery13 (talk) 20:43, 16 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi all, I reviewed your wiki page, the review can be found here. Great job overall! https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Krone035/Low-Nutrient,_Low-Chlorophyll_(LNLC)_Regions/Meyergr_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review Meyergr (talk) 16:08, 17 November 2021 (UTC)Grace[reply]

~~ Hi sorry my review is late but here it is. Great job all! https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Krone035/Low-Nutrient,_Low-Chlorophyll_(LNLC)_Regions/JenniferBeau_Peer_Review

JenniferBeau (talk) 03:09, 18 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey yall, Good stuff, I would put in the title (aka oligotrophic) so that people can find it easier. Make sure to link words to other wiki pages If in your lead you can put in a few sentences as to why this is important I think that would help a lot. Like the main takeaways. -Raquel — Preceding unsigned comment added by Raquel Gilliland (talk • contribs) 22:28, 18 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]