Talk:Alfred E. Montgomery/GA1
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 17:04, 3 February 2013 (UTC)
I'll start this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:04, 3 February 2013 (UTC)
- Only link ships on first appearance in main body. Ranger is one example.
- When was he promoted to Captain? Some of these jobs would seem to be at that grade rather early in his career.
- Legion of Merits are bog-common at flag rank. Not at all sure that they're worth reproducing per se. Can't you integrate the material into the text somehow?
- Is there a scheme behind your use of the USS prefix? Essex uses it twice, but Independence doesn't get it once.
- Typo: successfully preformed
- What is Commander Fleet Air? Can't be too responsible if it's only a two-star position?
- He's in command of the aircraft units assigned to the fleet, but since most of them are in fact embarked on carriers, he has no operational role, and the post is an administrative one. You have to remember that three- and four-star flag officers were rare before 1945. Hawkeye7 (talk) 07:38, 15 February 2013 (UTC)
--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 04:30, 10 February 2013 (UTC)